The first poem that i had commented on was on Amani's Blog. Her poem "That Night" was about a girl who had gotten raped for her first time, and she was very sad and very unhappy. I liked how she elaborated on what the girl felt, at the end of the poem because not everybody has been through this. I also liked that Amani's poem had rhyming in it, and i Love a poem with rhyme. The best part i liked about her poem was her picture because i thought that it had matched and went perfect for her poem, because the girl seemed to me felt sad and unhappy, just like how the girl from "That Night" felt.
The second poem that i had commented on was on Kamillah's Blog. Her poem "My Torn Heart" was about a Lady having her Heart broken by a Guy which she definetly loved. I liked that her poem had rhyming in it just like Amani's, and also i like how Kamillah elaborated on how the Lady felt about her Heart being broken by the man that she Loved. The best part i thought about her poem was that, it was a Love poem that had made sense with rhyming in it.
The third poem that i had commented on was on Learsi's Blog. Her poem "The Tragic Day" was about her Grandmother dying and how she saw her die in front of her eyes, and i thought that this was really sad, because nobody should see anybody die in front of their eyes. I liked how Learsi put alot of detail into her poem, for example she first wrote about her day with her grandmother and didnt go straight into the death of her grandmother. I thought that it was good that she didnt go straight into the death of her grandmothers because if she didnt we wouldnt have known what her grandmother was like. But since she had told about her whole day with her Grandmother, we knew how her Grandmother was like. Her Grandmother seemed like a very fun, energetic person that loved to do what Learsi liked to do.
Even though Learsi's poem didnt have rhyming in it, it was still good because her poem is one of those poems where you dont need rhyming in it and it would still be a good poem.
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